Friday, December 4, 2020

PEER REVIEW OF BROWNSVILLE HERALD GOOD CRITICISM

From: Former Herald Writer
To: Brownsville Herald Editor

Please forgive me if I point out an easily-correctable verb-subject error in your "Team Brownsville" piece in today's Herald.

In the lead paragraph you say that "Team Brownsville will be recognized . . . . . for 'their' . . .work." Well, "Team Brownsville" is singular and should be modified by a singular verb . . . "its."

"Their" is plural and would modify something like . . ." . ..two Team Brownsvilles . . ." will be recognized for "their."

Verb-subject agreement is important to good writing. It would make yours better.

Best regards,
A colleague

23 comments:

Anonymous said...

The Herald butchers the English language constantly. This is nothing new.

Anonymous said...

What's new? When I was teaching, I used the Brownsville Herald to verify complete understanding of correct grammar, spelling, punctuation, excetera,
and even my 1st year ESL students could find the many mistakes. What is so sad is that even the local TV news channels have the same problem -"If I had went..." and "I should have came..." These are professionals that need to make sure their printed material is perfect.

Anonymous said...

A worst speller is half coco mutt retard! Ese guey only went up to 6th grade special Ed! Pendejo looked silly wearing his yellow helmet while inside the small school bus! Hahahahaha!

Anonymous said...

You should learn from that, Juan. You're sloppy yourself.















But you're a Mexican, so.........

Anonymous said...

WOW these idiots make grammatical errors all the time and they charge for that? UNBELIEVABLE!!!

THIS IS A BLOG AND ALL BLOGS ARE NOT REPEAT NOT FORMAL WRITINGS AS LONG AS YOU GET YOUR MESSAGE ACROSS, THAT'S ALL THAT MATTERS.

Anonymous said...

This from DA BLIMP -

"STIMULOUS UPDATE: PELOSI SPEAKS AND INSTEAD OF FOCUSING IN ON COMPROMISE GOES ON ATTACK AGAINST TRUMP"

How do you spell STIMULUS?

Fat people can't spell!!!! ja ja ja ja ja

Anonymous said...

So martial law is next. No wonder I saw hillbilly coco wanna be white buying a water pistola over at HEB ooops walmart. Pinche pendejo wanted to trade his mascara and some lady security cop came over and kicked his bud out of the store.

Anonymous said...


Biden says Trump should attend his inauguration for the sake of America's 'image'

Doesn't he want to declare martial law?

Call the military not trump to attend his inauguration!!!

Anonymous said...

Como se dice.."prestame tu pedorro" o " tu pedorro me prestas"?

Anonymous said...

The last time I checked "its" is not a "verb". Just saying.

Anonymous said...

@5:20
IDIOTA!!!

Anonymous said...

Lucio, a Brownsville native who has served the state’s 38th district since 2007, with investors has purchased the Romeo’s Pizza franchise rights for the Austin and Rio Grande Valley markets. Lucio is already a franchisee for Orangetheory Fitness, with locations in Brownsville

They all run for the same reason TO ENRICH THEM SELVES NOTHING ELSE!!!!

Anonymous said...

Fat people can't spell!!!! ja ja ja ja ja

The city want the fatties to use the bike trail I guess they are funning out of options. Hahahahaha jajajajaja lol smh kma

Anonymous said...

Search persists for parents of 628 kids separated at border
Doing it all wrong just tell them they'll get a check

Anonymous said...

Must be a Gringo that caught the mistake. local Mexicans don't know enough grammar, either English or Spanish, to catch it.

Anonymous said...

It's not even good when used as toilet paper. Well, that's what someone told me when we were talking about bathroom tissue substitutes when the shortage caused by Covid 19 became an inconvenience.

Anonymous said...

December 4, 2020 at 3:55 PM

I D I O T A !

Anonymous said...

December 5, 2020 at 12:52 PM

to catch it
ESTUPID PINCHE GRINGO HILLBILLY NEVER WENT TO SCHOOL IDIOTA!

Anonymous said...

@9:53 ESTUPUID? Learn how to spell Pendejo,before you try to correct someone! Pinche retard special Ed dropout!

Anonymous said...

Worry about selling newpapers not who makes grammatical mistakes, seems like this daily is run by a bunch of monkeys

Anonymous said...

December 6, 2020 at 6:35 PM

the use of irony to mock or convey contempt its call sarcasm pendejo hillbilly e s t u p i d ! s m d

Anonymous said...

December 4, 2020 at 3:55 PM
December 6, 2020 at 6:35 PM

I D I O T A !

Anonymous said...

December 4, 2020 at 3:55 PM
December 6, 2020 at 6:35 PM

He has to use this blog to make his idiotic remarks they don't have blogs over at the appalachian cesspool

rita